November 15,
2013
Dear Mr. Officer, 
                 
I am writing this letter to show my appreciation it’s my pleasure to say
thank you for your courageous services to our country but with all due respect
sir I would like to give you an honest advice concerning the declared of your
proposed over the radio.  The declared
you proposed on the radio was due to identify the most violent gang members and
offer services and training for jobs however if they don’t accept the offer
they would get the stick. In order to carry on this action I would first
recommend to truly think what should be done instead of rushing through this
process. There’s three qualities to obtained in this process is persistent,
compassion, and nonjudgmental. 
The offer you propose reminds me of Gregory Boyle
who is a Jesuit priest and the founder and executive director of Homeboy
Industries. He has run Homeboy Industries more than twenty years, a gang intervention
program located in Los Angelo’s the gang capital of the world. The Homeboy
Industries is a youth program following the work of the Christian base communities
at Dolores Mission Church. This program is targeted to assist gang members such
as educational classes, employment services, mental health counseling and legal
services.
  In his book
Tattoos on the Heart he tells stories of gang members he got to befriend with
and had a chance to have a relationship of friendship and love. Gregory Boyle
had these qualities persistent, compassion and nonjudgmental and more however
Boyle was filled with compassion he gave love to all the gang members he met in
Homeboy Industries. No matter what you have done he would open up his arms and
heart and give you the opportunity to seek better for yourself in the future.
Boyle also didn’t tag them as “gang members” he seen them as humans that went
through the wrong path and his passion is to help them discover there true path
in life.  Although he also seen violence,
corruption, and deaths he still had hope in improving their lives for a better
and brighter one. This is known as persistent in worst situation he still
believes and doesn’t give up. Of course he lets them come to him when they’re
ready to change or he offers them support by Dolores Mission Church.  In the book Tattoos on the heart “Marinate in
the God who is always greater than our tiny conception, the God who loves
without measure and without regret “ Boyle Marinates in God allowing him to
give him strength and compassion towards others because God loves us no matter
who we are as humans. 
If or not believe in God there’s no reason to ignore
that we need to have compassion towards others allowing us to support others
with love and not a “duty” work. We all are humans no matter our background,
race, or sex. God send us to this world to love why do we see violence and hatred?
Well we as humans allow evil to take over are souls and be corrupted by our
environment and in order to change our self’s we need to have compassion in us.
In conclusion I advised to spend those $10 million
dollars wisely such as I said in this letter. Let’s go in George Boyle path and
follow his courageous actions. I only ask for compassion and in compassion there's answer for our questions. what's there's to loose if we allow of self's to give love unconditionally like God who gives us love and doesn't forget us, were the ones who forget him. 
Sincerely 
Maria Villalobos 
Maria, This is good in that it is focused on persuading the Chief. I am concerned about the number of errors in here. Let's talk today and then figure out where to go. You should rewrite this over the break.
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